This term we have been reading the 1 and only Ivan this week we have been building Ivans new domain me,Shilah,Allie,Mackenzie and tayla made the domain together using cardboard,tape and paint Ivans domain has a tyre swing, a bed a slide and it is a 3 story house/
Hi Skylah, I'm Perle form Wainui Beach School in Gisborne. I like how you used colours that matched up together for Ivans domain. It's great how you made it a big two story enclosure with lots of space for Ivan to play and run around in. If I was Ivan I'd look down at all the other gorillas and say to myself "I know you're jealous." Have you ever seen a gorilla? This is artistic and creative but next time add some more commas and full stops so that it's easier to read. Overall I think is a fantastic blog post. Keep up the good work!
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