Friday, 2 November 2018

the tale of Despereaux.

This term we are reading the Tale of Despereaux. Miss Tisdall gave us a sentence from the book and we had to write what happened next. This is the sentence she gave us.


The beating of the drum let them know that an important decision would have to be made one that affected the safety and well-being of the entire mouse community.

this is what I wrote...

Despereaux could hear drums going bing bang boom in the distance. He was getting scared he didn’t know what it was. He zig zags down the old wooden stairs to the drum sound. He sees all these people  making so much noise. He look at them confused and they looked at him confused. He walked to the drums and he found a beautiful girl playing the drums and fainted onto the floor.

When he woke up he found himself in a room he couldn't quite figure out what room he was in. Looking around and he screamed at the top of his lungs.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Skylah

    This is a great piece of writing and I really enjoyed reading your work. I really like this story.
    The author of this book is one of my favourite. Have you read the book The Miraculous Journey of Edward Tulane? I really like this one.

    Keep up the good work!

    Mrs Costello :)

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